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Personal Voice

Personal Voice.....

In class lately we have been learning about personal voice.Personal voice is all about writing about your feelings,emotions,thoughts,opinions.You add in what you would say or do.Another part of personal voice is to make sure the reader knows how you are feeling at different times in the text. 

(e.g) The dog ran so fast,the collar slipped of its head! By this time I was freaking out!

 

In that sentence I was freaking out because the collar had slipped off the dogs head.That is personal voice,since I was letting the reader know exactly how I felt.

Before Camp

On Tuesday my class and few other classes are going on a school camp.

We have activity groups and each group do different  at a time.I am excited for doing the water slide,because I have seen images and its looks really long and fun.I am also excited about archery,because I do archery and I like doing archery.I am very excited about making the raft, because last year we went on camp and made  rafts and it was very fun.

I'm not excited if I  fall out of the kayak because  there are Eels  and the water is very brown.

Some of the activity were:

Archery

Eeling  

kayaking 

raft making

And more.....

I like going to camp,because Its really fun,you learn lots of different things and It teaches you independents.
I am feeling excited about all the nature surrounding us.There is lots of bush and I am really looking forward to everything!

I hope everyone has a great time at camp and enjoys them self.